Make A Change

Dear Editor,

 I have been exposed to an issue that concerne(gr.) me a lot. In our society, women and men don't get the same rights. I believe that our society needs to change the way it works, and become more supportive of social equality.  

As I see it, our society is controlled by people, who judge women by their gender and not by their abilities. Females are not able to vote, they can't work outside of the house, as well as say their opinions in public. I believe that women deserve the same rights as men, since both of them are humans, and were born the same way. 

In addition, giving women rights would change the way our society works for the best. I believe, that it would create an advanced and modern society, which believes in social equality. As I see it, allowing females, for example, (to) work(ww.-hold) full-time job(s) would create a well educated society, which has better financial conditions.       

To conclude, I would say that our society needs to be changed and become more modern and advanced. If you believe that women should no longer be afraid to share their opinions in public, make a change by hiring them as writers in your magazine. As a result, women will have their own place to share their thoughts and opinions with everyone, shamelessly. 

With respect and appreciation,

Marry Ann Evans  

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Daphna