A Letter of Complaint

                                                                                                                   

14 Sun street

Tel Aviv, 52345, Israel

November 2, 2013

Mrs. Adams
The Manager
Forever 21 fashion
POB 14457
Tel Aviv

Dear Mrs. Adams,

Lately, I was very disappointed to see that your store, "Forever 21", has raised its prices by more than 30%. I am writing this letter(sp.) in the hope of changing the prices range and making them affordable again. 

I have been shopping at your store for more than 5 years. I used to love shopping at "Forever 21" since the prices were affordable and clothing items were always fashionable. Ever since the store increased its prices I can barley find one item which is in my price range. As a result, I can no longer shop there as frequently as I used to and buy the items I love. 

First of all, most of the store's customers are teenage girls that usually can't afford to buy expensive clothing items. By raising the prices range by more than 30%, the store would probably lose most of their customers since they won't be able to shop there anymore. Therefore, increasing the prices can harm the store's popularity and entry.

To conclude, I would appreciate it if you consider my suggestion to lower the clothes' prices to normal. You can see clearly from the above, that increasing the prices harm both the costumes and the store itself. In order to satisfy everyone, please think deeply about what I wrote and make the right decision. 

Yours faithfully,

Emma Smith

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Daphna